Friday, March 7, 2008

Amazing Adjectives

5/6C have been using amazing adjectives to improve their writing.

Laying in the nice, hot sun was a big, long tree snake with a small, thin head and a green, fat body.
by Jacob

A slithering, green tree snake was lying on a fat,black tree trunk flicking its black tongue in and out.

by Mick

Crawling inside a large, hollow tree trunk was a small, dark goanna with a long, silver flicking tail.
by Timothy

Down along the slow, narrow, twisting river lies a little, blue bird catching its morning tea.
by Jemma